A little better. But still proportionately off balance. Need to work on my symmetry and foreshortening as well. I included some step by step drawings below. I think my pencil roughs look better than my finished art.
An additional challenge I set for my self is to finish a drawing in less than 30 minuets and post it regardless of how it looks. It forces me not to overthink things.
If anyone else wants to join in, please do. I will be happy to showcase any and all art for Inktober. As always, your comments and critiques are welcome.